The following is by Writers in the Grove member, Bev Walker, based upon her review of the book, “Thieves Break In,” by Cristina Sumners, Bantam Books, 2004, a British detective story.
The following are the real, actual Chapter headings of this book.
Chapter 1 – Late July 1997, Wednesday – (In which we are introduced to the victim, one Rob Hillman, who is missing. The last sentence states he’s been found. So far, so good. I look forward to some interesting detective work.)
Chapter 2 – January 1997 – Almost Seven Months Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 3 – Summer 1933 – Sixty-four Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 4 – Wednesday – The Day of Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 5 – February 1997 – Five Months Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 6 – June 1944, Shortly After D-Day – Fifty-three Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 7 – Thursday – The Day After Rob Hillman’s Death, About Seven in the Evening
Chapter 8 – February 1997 – Five Months Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 9 – May 1945, Two Weeks After VE Day – Fifty-two Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 10 – Saturday Morning – Three Days After Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 11 – April 1997, During the Easter Holidays – Three Months Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 12 – June 1962 – Thirty-five Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 13 – Saturday Lunchtime – Three Days After Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 14 – Early July 1997 – Three Weeks Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 15 – July 1963 – Thirty-four Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 16 – Early July 1997, Sunday – Four Days After Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 17 – Mid July 1997 – Two Weeks Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 18 – Spring 1972 – Twenty-five Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 19 – Lunchtime – Five Days After Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 20 – The Monday Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 21 – Twenty Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 22 – Monday Midafternoon – Five Days After Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 23 – A Wednesday in Late July 1997 – Thirty Minutes Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 24 – Winter 1995 – Two Years Before Rob Hillman’s Death
Chapter 25 – Monday – Five Days After Rob Hillman’s Death, Three Hours After Sir Gregory’s Death
Chapter 26 – Minutes Later
Chapter 27 – A Few Minutes Earlier
Chapter 28 – Two Days Later (mystery solved!)
THE END
Dear Writers,
Now, I consider myself only a moderately orderly person. And a fan of detective stories. Especially British detective stories. Any detective story with a sense of humor, but this one really put me to the test.
I’m not adverse to scanning, and dumping, the dull, the witless, the inane. If it doesn’t grab me in the first three chapters, I may give it a spit and polish and go on to other things, but believe it or not, in spite of its time frame acrobatics, this one held me in there.
I read it all, clear to the end, while flipping back and forth to keep reminding myself which decade we were in. It was like trying to read on a bus traveling fifty miles an hour over a very bumpy road.
The author’s first acknowledgement is for her “splendid” Editor, and I quote: “for refraining from murdering me while I kept her waiting an extra year for the manuscript.” One wonders if that editor is still on the job. Or maybe in a rest home somewhere. Or waiting tables in a peaceful kindergarten where there’s regular food fights.
Nevertheless, dear readers, would you believe? This is a good story!
But please, dear writers, have some mercy.
Writers in the Grove 